Criticize my writing please :)?

It feels a little boring to me--not so much the actual story as the way it's written. Feels more like a summary. I wouldn't read the rest unless the style changed to a more active one. EDIT: I retract that statement now. Active isn't the right word. More...emotional. It's just that right now I don't feel there's much of a point to this story. I have no idea what Noah's thinking for most of this. What am I supposed to feel as I read this? I don't know. Less regular description and more emotion.